Thursday, January 22, 2009

Vague Twists


Vague twists
Secure in some way,
Stability somehow ,
But a sudden curse ,
And land renounced
Debts incurred ,
Burdened purse
Credit scoops now ruptured

Streaming solutions flowing by
Quick decisions ,
The call of time
One fall in that prestigious stream
Had dug a grave for eternity
She was just another victim
Like the million crushed souls
who abandoned their inner voice
And blindly followed
All the stories told

The stories she heard,
were centuries old
they screamed :
"There was a man he had a dream
to be famous with a doctor 's degree......
he murdered ,plundered ,
trampled the soul
who ever dared to stand in his way.....

Carelessly he harmed .....
so that HE could stand tall
Conquer Be envied by all"
his followers sung praises et all
Amazed , perplexed
she followed too
got a degree in her name, as seconds flew
but nevertheless she crumbled too
her inner voice she never heard
it screams out :"Peace, Art is your rebirth"

The fallen doctor though creative and wise
Now chose to nurture her creative side


Artistic vibes
Creative surge
searching for the appropriate curve

Then , A singular chance to exhibit
The various works of art she did
Everything she learned in life,
surfaced its brighter side
Her knowledge of bones
the way they worked
the forms they took ,
gave her art a second look

Her surgical hand in brief spans
carved the stones in beautiful tones
Her processing thoughts did interpret
bigger meanings in real depth
Quick math and a grasping cap
Earned her a prestigious point on the world map

At the end she realized ,
what a grave mistake she did
she let the noise of others opinions
drown her deepest whims
She cried out to her fellow mates
My success was never planned ....
"You've got to find ,
where You can manage to really stand "

fatema

2 comments:

Unknown said...

this one is a surprise... i dont see it as somethin inspirational towards doin what you feel you should be doin, being true to yourself n stuff.rather i see it with a somewhat retrospective veiw. desire beats everything.

fatema rangwalla said...

yeah thank u :)